Entering the Blogosphere...

Welcome to my new blog that I have been asked to write as part of my residency at Commonword, which was my prize for winning the Dike Omeje Slam Poetry Award 2008.
I'm going to use the blog to share new work, discuss goings on in the poetry world and generally muse about the strange process of thinking words in your head, putting them on paper, memorising them and/or reading them out in public, and trying to get people to give you money for doing so.
I'm setting myself the target of writing a post at least once a week, which will include a new poem, even if it's just a haiku. One of my (and I would imagine many writers') problems is that I don't maintain a regular practice, but tend to write in furious bursts of intense, late night, deadline looming panic. As a result I always find myself trying to write the final draft first, but really only ever perform the first draft, meaning my writing is never as good as I think it could be. This blog is an attempt to rectify that, and get people's input into my re-writing, if they're interested enough to read it and comment back.
So, this week's poem I'm sharing is one of two new pieces I wrote for the Blue Festival at the Royal Exchange last week. It's from a new work in progress called Parental Advisory, which looks at the link between violence depicted in the media, particularly in (mostly hip hop) lyrics, and violence enacted in society. I'm hoping this will be my second solo show, and will incorporate spoken word, rap, beatbox, movement, dramatic monologue, visual images and original music created by breakbeat producers, Atomic Hooligan.
I've attached it as an image, because whilst it's a performance poem I'm working at trying to make all my performance work effective as page poetry also. This is not just because I want to be able to sell books as well as cds, but because I feel that while there is a difference between poetry intended to be read and poetry intended to be read aloud, it's often a false distinction and that any poetry worth its salt should be able to be breathe in both atmospheres, so to speak. So this is my first attempt at something like a concrete poem; one that looks like what it says. The poem doesn't have a title yet, though I'm thinking of calling it 'Faster than a Speeding Poem'. It's based on a quote by the Arts Council's diversity director in a recent issue of Time Out, who was talking about using the arts to re-empower young people and stopping them getting involved in 'the stupid things we've all seen on television. We would like to replace the bullets with poems'.

Comments

Pens and Bullets

I like the fire, speed and energy of your poem and the funny-serious link of poems, bullets and arms manufacture & supply. In that sense it’s very much a Ben Mellor poem.

The USA poet Kevin Powell (Nuyorican poet from way back?) has written poems intelligently and movingly on this subject.

On is it the best version, two opposing schools: the '1st word, best word' school v the school that says, forget your first seocnd and third thoughts on the subject they have probably already been done/ likely to be cliche's.

I guess bullets come out of a certain desperation / limited horizons and poems?... where do they spring from? The underlying question may be what is the relationship of poetry and politics? How best is politics carried into poetry? Amiri Baraka and LKJ are two great exponents. The Manchester based poet, Martin De Mello has his own theories on this

PS. what are your two top tips for a poet who wants to read/perform their poem/s before a live audience?

-Pete

Musing on nuyorican poets

Umm, now i've had time to recall, I think the poet who rally impressed on the subject was Willie Perdomo, not Kevein Powell. Sorry Kevin! -Pete

Hey Pete, thanks for your

Hey Pete, thanks for your comments. First thought first is the only way I seem to get things done at the moment, let alone second or third! Perhaps I should try experimenting...
I hadn't come across Willie Perdomo before, thanks for the heads up, there's a nice little interview with him here: http://www.mipoesias.com/2004/interview.htm, alongside one with David Lehman, which is equally illuminating, and equally depressing; Perdomo had travelled the world, recorded and published a first collection by the time he was my age, and Lehman says he finds writing as pleasurable as an evening cocktail after a hard day's work! I feel a long way off either experience...

evening cocktails

yeh a poem as an evening cocktail, thatd be the day! I like your tips. eye contact, learn the work, and relax. I would probably add, have something to say, some passion to communicate. Though there was/ is the east european school of poets who were wary of mere passion and prefer/ed reason/dissection to get away from rhetoric/lies

By the way, my two top tips

By the way, my two top tips for a poet reading their work for the first time are 1. Learn your stuff! There's nothing that communicates nerves like a trembling bit of paper, and eye contact is essential - it's hard at first and can feel off putting but if you can make eye contact with as many people as possible by the end of the poem the whole room will feel like you spoke to them. 2. Breathe! Take your time and give as much weight to the silences as the words. Stanislavski said the 3 most important things for an actor to remember are relaxation, relaxation, relaxation. And that holds for any type of performance...

image size?

Hmm, ok, you might not actually be able to read the poem, good start! I tried to save it as a larger image but it keeps coming up the same size... Maybe if you right click, save the image then zoom in in your photo viewer? I don't know, not very technical me. I'll put the audio recording up on myspace soon though...

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